Stablerstolmyheart
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Post by Stablerstolmyheart on Nov 16, 2006 0:09:06 GMT -5
I've recently started some new fics. This is one that I've entitled Home, and its about Olivia's return home, But I'm in a kind of delema. Right now this Fic or Ficlet is a drabble and I've been wondering if I should add more. I like it as is but, have an Idea if more should be added so I decided to post it here and get some openions. So please read and tell me what you think. If you Guys want more I'll certainly add more. By the way this is kind of a spin off from "Infiltrated". Note the first line , atfter that is all my creation. lol Home Again“I need to know if she’s safe” Elliot said in a frustrated tone. “I’m fine” a soft and very familiar voice said from the doorway. Elliot turned around Quickly; His heart Lifted and his eyes lit up at the Women standing just a few feet away. “Liv” he said excitedly “Liv, Oh Liv” he said rushing over to her and not even trying to resist the urge to hug her, he pulled her in to his arms and held her tightly inhaling her sent while enjoying the feel of her body against his. “Elliot” she sighed wrapping her arms around him. Being here with him and especially in his arms felt so right. “I’m so happy you’re home and most of all safe” Elliot said into her hair. “I missed you so much” they looked up and said at the same time and smiled. “Still in sync” Munch said. “Of course” she said putting her arms around his neck and smiling for the first time in a long time.
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Post by Finaddict on Nov 17, 2006 6:48:21 GMT -5
I liked it Stablestolmyheart, I don't know if you should add more or not. My major writing accomplishments are signing my name to credit card slips, so I am not one to offer an opinion on that
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Stablerstolmyheart
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Post by Stablerstolmyheart on Nov 17, 2006 16:19:37 GMT -5
I liked it Stablestolmyheart, I don't know if you should add more or not. My major writing accomplishments are signing my name to credit card slips, so I am not one to offer an opinion on that LoL! Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. ;D
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Post by Finaddict on Nov 17, 2006 19:01:02 GMT -5
Your welcome. I am not much of a shipper with this show or anyother show, but I will say this..If I was forced to pick a ship of El/Liv or El/Dani it would have to be liv. Other than that I just dont ship much. Unless of course I ship Fin with ME
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Stablerstolmyheart
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Post by Stablerstolmyheart on Nov 17, 2006 23:22:01 GMT -5
Your welcome. I am not much of a shipper with this show or anyother show, but I will say this..If I was forced to pick a ship of El/Liv or El/Dani it would have to be liv. Other than that I just dont ship much. Unless of course I ship Fin with MEI normally don't ship in anyother shows either. Except One Life to Live. John and Natalie are so cute. On this show I ship the obvious E/O, but I also like the A/O and C/O ships too. I even like The E/K, E/C and E/A ships. El and Liv always come fist though. ;D You enjoy Fin. lol. May he make you happy.
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