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Post by Trublu on Mar 4, 2007 13:22:54 GMT -5
Excellent second chapter, mdkeep19! I definitely can't wait for more. You have the relationship between the two Stablers and Olivia down to a "t".
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Post by mdkeep19 on Mar 5, 2007 3:02:07 GMT -5
Once again, thanks for the reviews, Finaddict and Trublu. I have chapter three up; this one focuses on Olivia, and there's another scene with both Olivia and Kathy. And we finally get to read one of the letters Elliot wrote. Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/3417523/4/
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Post by Finaddict on Mar 5, 2007 19:43:06 GMT -5
Boy another great chapter. well done mdkeep19. I loved it and can't wait to see how you write about the kids.
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Post by mdkeep19 on Mar 10, 2007 2:14:21 GMT -5
I've actually completed three more chapters, which focus mainly on the kids... This is the link to chapter four, which should lead you to chapters five and six, as well. Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/3417523/5/
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Post by Finaddict on Mar 10, 2007 10:25:24 GMT -5
Mdkeep, those chapters were fantastic. I love this story even with the sadness of Elliot's death. Keep up the fantastic work.
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Post by Trublu on Mar 10, 2007 13:55:41 GMT -5
I've been bawling over my keyboard, great job mdkeep.
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Post by mdkeep19 on Mar 28, 2007 13:02:44 GMT -5
Chapter Seven is finished, finally. This one took me a long time to write, I was busy with school and other such stuff. This one (and the next) will deal with the twins. www.fanfiction.net/s/3417523/8/
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Post by Finaddict on Mar 28, 2007 18:21:38 GMT -5
OMG..I guess I say that alot. ::)You just know this family so well and I feel you portray Olivia's thoughts and actions well too. Great job. Can't wait for more
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Post by Trublu on Mar 28, 2007 19:31:53 GMT -5
Are you sure you're not a Stabler in disguise, mdkeep? Great job!
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