greeneyesstaring
Detective Specialist
The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Nov 29, 2006 22:35:33 GMT -5
Hiya guys! This is just a fic I decided to write, and I'm working on it. Chapter one is up, so what do you say you give it a read (if you want to) and get back to me with some feedback? Linky-poo: www.fanfiction.net/s/3264292/1/
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Stablerstolmyheart
Sergeant
"Known for their, hard work, dedication and terrible coffee"
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Post by Stablerstolmyheart on Nov 29, 2006 23:18:20 GMT -5
Pretty good. ;)Nicely done too. Keep up the food work
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greeneyesstaring
Detective Specialist
The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Nov 29, 2006 23:21:52 GMT -5
My first review! And it's positive! Thanks for R&R-ing, Stablerstolemyheart. I'm glad to see you liked it.
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Nov 30, 2006 12:59:59 GMT -5
I liked it, it was good, and aw, poor Munch! lol, I can just imagine that, an ep where everything is turned upside down-Munch in a good mood, Fin losing at wastebasket-ball, and a slow morning! lol, very good, is it a one off piece, or can we expect more?
~xJemmax~
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greeneyesstaring
Detective Specialist
The world is just one big conspiracy...
Posts: 245
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Nov 30, 2006 15:13:10 GMT -5
Expect more. It's good to see the begining was liked. But there is more to come.
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Post by Finaddict on Nov 30, 2006 19:44:41 GMT -5
Expect more. It's good to see the begining was liked. But there is more to come. I am counting on there being more to come. I loved the first part ;D
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greeneyesstaring
Detective Specialist
The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Nov 30, 2006 22:56:59 GMT -5
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Post by Finaddict on Dec 1, 2006 7:34:31 GMT -5
I'm lovin this greeneyesstaring. Good job on both Munch and Fin's dialogue.
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Dec 1, 2006 14:11:30 GMT -5
I loved it, it is very good, especially with staying in charecter, well done, cant wait to see more!
~xJemmax~
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greeneyesstaring
Detective Specialist
The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 1, 2006 14:44:33 GMT -5
Woot! Nice to see I can keep 'em in character. Thanks for the reviews. I'll update as soon as I get the chance.
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svuspirit
Recruit
Listen to your heart, and your soul will survive
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Post by svuspirit on Dec 3, 2006 3:54:59 GMT -5
yay!!! hooray for green!!! good luck i love it!!
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Post by Trublu on Dec 3, 2006 19:46:22 GMT -5
I'm loving this story so far. It's very well written, and your characters are very... well, in character. Can't wait for more!
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greeneyesstaring
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The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 3, 2006 20:27:07 GMT -5
Good reviews all the way, I must be doing somthing right, no?
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Trublu, and you too, svuspirit. The next chapter will be up soon.
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greeneyesstaring
Detective Specialist
The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 8, 2006 20:31:25 GMT -5
Well, after working on it for a week, I'm happy to say that Chapter 3 is up. For those of you reading, enjoy! Oh, and I apologize in advance for any annoying typos. Here's the link: www.fanfiction.net/s/3264292/3/
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Post by Finaddict on Dec 8, 2006 21:11:12 GMT -5
I read it and I loved it. You sure do know your SVU characters. hurry with more ;D
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