greeneyesstaring
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The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 9, 2006 2:11:31 GMT -5
I'll hurry as fast as I can, Finaddict. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;D
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Post by Finaddict on Dec 9, 2006 6:40:09 GMT -5
I'll hurry as fast as I can, Finaddict. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;D Okay I will wait a patiently as I can..LOL...
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svuspirit
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Post by svuspirit on Dec 9, 2006 19:36:10 GMT -5
This keeps getting better and better!!!! Please, keep it going!
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greeneyesstaring
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 10, 2006 0:32:55 GMT -5
Thanks for the review, svuspirit.
To all of you reading, what are the things you like? And the things you don't?
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svuspirit
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Post by svuspirit on Dec 13, 2006 0:11:00 GMT -5
I like Munch and I don't like pedofiles...That was kinda lame. But whatever you know what i mean. you keep them in character and that's good!!! Keep shining star!!!!
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Dec 13, 2006 11:37:52 GMT -5
I love the way you can keep the charecters in charecter, and I loved the scene where Haley punched Munch, that was cool! ;D Well, not Munch getting punched, but the scene! (Hmm, I should have worded that better! ;D )
~xJemmax~
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greeneyesstaring
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 13, 2006 15:59:00 GMT -5
Yeah, I understand what you mean. I did think it was kind of mean to make him get hurt, but then again...there is that first part in chapter one. Thanks for the review; I appriciate the feedback.
What I'm really worried about is accidentally, without meaning to making Haley turn out kind of annoying. So if you see that she's getting toooooooo annoying, somone tell me.
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svuspirit
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Post by svuspirit on Dec 20, 2006 19:51:17 GMT -5
yay you updated! more please
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greeneyesstaring
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The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 22, 2006 2:39:16 GMT -5
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Post by Trublu on Dec 22, 2006 16:30:47 GMT -5
Great fourth chapter! I'm really into this story, I can't wait for more...
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Dec 23, 2006 11:48:08 GMT -5
I love your fanfic, can't wait for more updates, and you would not believe how into the story i keep getting! lol, I sat here reading it saying 'Oh, Haley you can trust Munch!' or 'Oooh Noo, bad perp making them play a game to win Munch and Haley's life!'! lol But then I guess I have no life, so its all good! Anyways, can't wait for an update!!! ~xJemmax~
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greeneyesstaring
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The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 23, 2006 16:08:29 GMT -5
Thanks for the great reviews, guys.
I'll keep typing away at chapter five.
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svuspirit
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Post by svuspirit on Jan 6, 2007 16:14:57 GMT -5
keep typing it's gettin gbetter and better each chapter!!
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