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Post by Sexystablersgal on Dec 16, 2006 14:35:16 GMT -5
Ok, here is the link to my first ever fanfic! Feedback is appreciated, as this is only a short piece, just so I can get the feel for writing, and something that I would actually have the courage to post, since you can't really, mutilate a short piece. (well, I hope you can't ) Also, thank you Trublu for beta-ing it for me!!! Anyway *gulp* the link: One Stormy Night~xJemmax~
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greeneyesstaring
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The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 16, 2006 16:52:10 GMT -5
That was good! You really captured feeling, which can be hard to do. I liked how you wrote in Elliot's point of view; it was fitting. I can't write feelings too well, so props to you for doing so. Great job!!
I left a review on the site, by the way.
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Dec 17, 2006 5:04:34 GMT -5
Oooh, Thank you!!!
Yeah, it was kinda something that hit me and wouldn't go away so I thought, meh, why not?! Although, I kind make a lot of really stupid mistakes when I was editing, after it being beta-ed, lol
But yeah, thanks for R and R-ing!!!
~xJemmax~
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greeneyesstaring
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The world is just one big conspiracy...
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Post by greeneyesstaring on Dec 17, 2006 15:45:39 GMT -5
Anytime, I'm glad you worte it and decided to share it with us.
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Post by Finaddict on Dec 17, 2006 20:14:29 GMT -5
Very good sexystablersgal. You did a great job!!!!!!
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Dec 18, 2006 14:00:06 GMT -5
Really? How cool! Well, Thank You everyone for taking the time to read it, and for leaving comments about it, it means a lot to me!
~xJemmax~
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Stablerstolmyheart
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Post by Stablerstolmyheart on Dec 18, 2006 19:29:19 GMT -5
Nice. :)The Red hair and green eyes, sounds kind of like Casey lol. Great job though. I Liked it. My fic is just about done. thank god it's taken me for ever. lol I just might get it done to night if I work like nonstop. lol ;D
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Dec 19, 2006 14:14:43 GMT -5
Nice. :)The Red hair and green eyes, sounds kind of like Casey lol. Great job though. I Liked it. My fic is just about done. thank god it's taken me for ever. lol I just might get it done to night if I work like nonstop. lol ;D Oh yeah, lol, well, either way, Im happy! Funny, I never wig out at a shippy moment between Alex/El or Casey/El....how strange! lol and Yay!!!! I cant wait to read the fanfic your working on!!! ~xJemmax~
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Apr 30, 2007 14:11:48 GMT -5
Ok, I have another fic! It's a Alex/Liv one, and is still a work in progress, but I thought I'd get the first chapter up! So, yeah, here it is! Please R&R, any kind of comment is appreciated, especailly constructive comments, as I would love to develop my writing. Anyways, here! Title: Party Time Genre: Romance/Angst Rating: M, to prevent possible upset, it's not an M yet, don't worry! Summary: Parties are meant to be light and sunny, not dark and clouded with emotions… URL: Party Time
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Post by Finaddict on Apr 30, 2007 19:02:11 GMT -5
I think its off to a good start. I like Alex and Olivia together ;D
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Post by Sexystablersgal on May 2, 2007 11:32:08 GMT -5
Thanks Finaddict, I had serious doubts about this one, purely for the fact that it was in Olivia's point of view. But for some reason, it doesn't sound right written in anything other than that, if that makes sense? Anyways, thanks!
-Jems
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Post by bananabeth on May 29, 2008 16:47:28 GMT -5
Wow! All i can say is Wow ;D! Great work hun! Wish i was as good as you and I might just pass English! Keep them coming! Beth x
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twinkle
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Post by twinkle on Jul 14, 2008 1:29:10 GMT -5
That was really good!!! I loved it!
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Post by Sexystablersgal on Sept 11, 2008 14:00:04 GMT -5
Aw, thaks guys. I am now working on this fic again, lol, but I keep getting blocked, or homework lol. Hopefully I can get the second chapter up soon. Thanks again guys!
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