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Post by svufan22 on May 27, 2007 12:30:50 GMT -5
heres the link to mine www.fanfiction.net/s/3553754/1/please tell me what you think if it sucks don't be afraid to tell me that it sucks i've never done fanfiction before untill this idea popped in my head.
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Post by TBC5657 on May 27, 2007 17:54:53 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty good. I liked the storyline you had going and how you inserted the date, place & time like they do on TV. Other than a few minor typos and grammar errors, I thought it was great. Is it complete for sure or are you gonna add on to it?
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Post by svufan22 on May 28, 2007 17:11:46 GMT -5
its complete and thanks for the compliments but i'm thinking about doing a sequel that shows how the shooting effects benson mentally while dealing with a diffcult case.
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Post by TBC5657 on May 28, 2007 18:10:24 GMT -5
You're welcome. Let us know if you do the sequel - - I'd love to read it.
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Post by Finaddict on May 30, 2007 19:22:05 GMT -5
Nice story. I liked it.
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Post by marleen on Jun 1, 2007 11:24:39 GMT -5
I liked the story. Good job!
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